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The battle has been going on for weeks now. Food was being rationed and the arrows counted in hopes that they would last. The soldiers look wearily over the fields that they once played in that were now battle fields in the making. Would Eliy stand or would the enemy take her down in the end?



The first seventeen chapters can now only be viewed at their separate pages.



 

The rain beat hard against Illianna's armor though she was warmly encapsulated within, only the occasional shiver flooded her with a cascade of goospimples when a few droplets would stray down her collar. Her breath spilled fourth from her lips visibly in small cloud like formations as she began to slow, nearing her destination.
Her eyes focused intently upon a shapeless shadow as her feet carried her slowly closer towards the building within which, the reverberation of metal upon metal echoed rhythmically outward. She lifted her head in an important manner, casually allowing her feet to bear her in the general direction of what she knew was a waiting message.

In the dark he waited. He had been sent by their master. The one man that threatened the great city in which he hid. He had been sent to retrieve the spy, their master wished to speak with her. His body stiffened as he heard footsteps coming in his direction. He could hear the sounds of fists coming in contact with armor as men saluted their superior. The door to the small shack opened and a strike of lightning illuminated a lone figure before the door closed and darkness claimed the room once more. He sniffed the air and could smell her. There was a certain smell to a traitor, a sickly sweet smell that could not be duplicated. Slowly, he unfurled his body from the place where he had been hiding. The woman stiffened and her hand went to her blade as he showed himself to her. "Our master wishes to speak with you." His voice was soft in the quiet room. "He has a new task for you." He shivered in delight as the smell of her leashed fear wafted over him.

"Alright then," she inclined her head in a nervous gesture before reaffixing her eyes upon his own, unsteadily though it would appear. She slowly retracted her hand from the hilt of her sword, allowing it to fall along the side casually. She stiffened noticeably as she waited to follow.

A rumbling chuckle seemed to fill the room, not unlike the thunder that shook the sky outside. The figure that was previously like a shadowy mist seemed to take shape. It coalesced and came together finally in the shape of the one man that still struck a deep fear within Illianna's heart. Her response was immediate and seemingly fully ingrained in her mind. Her knees hit the ground with a dull thud, and her head immediately lowered so that her eyes were fixed at the ground just in front of her. She suppressed a shiver of disgust as she felt his hand on her chin, lifting her head so that her eyes met his. They were cold and black. Only death swirled within their depths. Hatred, and insanity. She fought valiantly to keep her eyes open.

"Ah, my most faithful traitor. I see that you have moved up in the world. You have taken over that filth's position. No matter, I have something much more important for you to do." The shadowy hand moved from her chin and the cold touch caressed her cheek. Again, Illianna suppressed the sick feeling rising in her belly. "What is it that you wish me to do M'lord?"

A look of insane ecstasy crossed his somewhat fine features. A face that may once have been called handsome, now twisted by the grip of madness. "What? No remarks about how I am here? 'Oh no my lord! They will find you!' " His voice pitching up to mock her voice. "They cannot feel me here, they do not have the power!" his voice snarled with maddening anger. "I am here among them, and they do not even know it! Powerful they call themselves, destined. Destined for what?! Nothing! They will all die here!" Illianna bit her lip until she could taste blood in order to keep her body where it was. When she had first agreed to help him, she was sure that he would have been able to change Eliy for the better...but now...she was not so sure. Raine, Feyarie, D'Hara, Soren...they were not as evil as he had made them out to be. They were constantly risking their lives in order to keep the people of the city safe. She wished now that she had never met this madman...but there was nothing to be done about it now. She was a woman of her word...and she would keep it, no matter that the man before her was totally mad.

When he had calmed, she asked again, "What would you have me do now m'Lord?" The man before her stopped and looked to her once more. His eyes were filled with insanity and with a voice so quiet she could barely hear what he was saying, he whispered his instructions in her ear. She wasn't sure how long she sat there staring into nothing. Her master had left long before, but still she sat there. His words burned in her mind. Slowly, she stood and stretched the sleep from her muscles. Illianna left the small room and walked back out into the rain. As she walked, his words whispered to her over and over. Seduce the Earth. He is my greatest threat. His mind is simple, and will be distracted by your beauty and graces. Seduce the Earth, mold him, shape him, distract him so that I may destroy them all.



The City of Eliy

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2004-05-17 [Lady Alaina]: lol ^^

2004-05-20 [Firous]: Having fun?

2004-05-20 [Lady Alaina]: Yippeeeeeeee! You bet I am! ^__^

2004-05-25 [Lady Alaina]: Yay! More players! And sorry I was gone so long. I was so busy this weekend...

2004-05-25 [Firous]: it's ok...I can't even get on during the weekends...my internet's down...v.v

2004-05-26 [Lady Alaina]: You watch Slayers,dont you? ^__^

2004-05-26 [K'jesrya]: Well...I don't think that D'lania should be sitting around doing nothing for very long *-*

2004-05-26 [Lady Alaina]: lol

2004-05-26 [Firous]: hehehe....and the plot starts...I just wish we could get more people x.x

2004-05-27 [Firous]: I'm thinking about dividing our story into chapters on the main page also...what do you think? We would still post here but it would be easier for people to read it in the chapter form

2004-05-28 [Firous]: Now Bethany...it's your turn...Start it! ^.^

2004-05-28 [K'jesrya]: ok...have fun guys!

2004-05-29 [Firous]: Yay!

2004-06-01 [Lady Alaina]: I kinda messed it up,but I hope you can work around my 'intrusion'...^^;

2004-06-05 [Firous]: hey I'm going to be kind of unactive for a couple days....[K'jesyra] you may play my character if you so wish....I love you and I know you can do it! ^.^

2004-06-06 [K'jesrya]: alrighty then...it looks like things should get interesting...lol

2004-06-07 [Lady Alaina]: Thats how I like my RPG's,interesting!!!

2004-06-09 [Firous]: Hehehe...I get to go to Ben and Andrews to RP now!!! Though Ben doesn't know at the moment that I am RPing on his comp....^.^...oh btw....Your turn K'jesrya!!!

2004-06-10 [Lady Alaina]: Um...I have a question.

2004-06-10 [K'jesrya]: and what is your question?

2004-06-10 [Lady Alaina]: Where did you get the name Xellos?

2004-06-11 [K'jesrya]: well...in another rpg that Firous and i are a part of, one of the other characters was a Unicorn, and his name was Xellos, Tiffany's, a.k.a. Firous, boyfriend played the unicorn, and so she kinda just stole it.

2004-06-11 [Lady Alaina]: ...Um,where did he origanly get it from?

2004-06-12 [K'jesrya]: That...i'm not sure...but i could ask him for ya.

2004-06-12 [Lady Alaina]: Thanks. 'Cause if I'm right.....I'm gonna offer him to join a club. ^^

2004-06-30 [Firous]: lol...is that right? Well I'm at his house...I could just ask him now for you

2004-06-30 [Firous]: He got it from an Anime

2004-07-06 [Firous]: ....*looks around* Is anybody out there??? <.<  v.v  >.>  ^.^  I guess not....Somebody! PLEASE POST!! *going crazy* @.@ I'm soo bored!! I want to get this going!! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!

2004-07-08 [Firous]: Yay!! Thanks for posting!

2004-07-09 [Lady Alaina]: lol Sry I was in Missouri....camping. No PC... ^^;;;;; Yeah,Xellos is the name of a mysterious priest in the show Slayers....whenever I see 'Xellos' I think of a silly priest that doesnt say anything about himself or what he's doing!!! Hahahaha......He always says 'It's a secret'.....hehehe....Um,what's the username of your friend? I'm gonna ask him to join my Slayers club. ^__^

2004-07-11 [Firous]: lol...his user name is actually TheWindrider....but he never comes on....stupid video games ^.~

2004-07-11 [Lady Alaina]: lol

2004-07-13 [K'jesrya]: HA HA!!! I posted. ^.-

2004-07-14 [Firous]: Yay!! Thank you soooooooooo much!! ^.^

2004-07-14 [Firous]: Hey...which ever elements you say have already gotten their sword (if any) I will add them to the Char. sheet ^.^ and I really hope that guy posts soon! ^.^

2004-07-18 [K'jesrya]: Actually...i think that the next 'Destined' will claim her element soon.....HAHAHAHAHA!!! ^.-

2004-07-19 [Firous]: hehehe...what do you think about Earth....that would be a nice one to do ^.^...Fire and Air can come in a bit...Alaina would you mind being the destined for Earth...if so I'll let you in on the history of the sword and what they do and stuff...

2004-07-20 [Lady Alaina]: Is it possible for me to be Fire?

2004-07-20 [RheaAlarice]: Hey Tiff...*Struggles with new computer* Im bored out of my wits...you gotta get me a role in this, lol I like to feel special. If you need an elements player I would take air or earth, you know unbeknowing to myself. hehe Alaina with fire is kinda spooky...good thing this castle is stone...O.o Just kidding. Oh..my last post was screwy, I put almond-like ears...lol I meant eyes. *shakes head*

2004-07-20 [Lady Alaina]: Actually,it makes sense because Alaina loves heat. (I made that in my char 'cause I swear I'm cold blooded in real life. ^_~)

2004-07-22 [K'jesrya]: Sure, you can be whatever element you want...fire is good...we'll just have to get tiff to explain it to you before we can go into the 'testing'you will have to complete before the blade can be yours

2004-07-23 [Firous]: Hey Rhea...what element do you prefere...I'm trying to get the guy to post or tell me if he wants one of the elements...ooooo oooooo you need to see my last post with Firous in Magical Kingdom the story It is truely awesome!!! and Alaina...if you wanna be fire I will give you a message describing everything that the sword is/means/represents...ok?

2004-07-23 [Lady Alaina]: Ok! ^^

2004-07-27 [K'jesrya]: I hope you are prepared for this... o.^

2004-08-01 [Lady Alaina]: Erm.....lol

2004-08-13 [RheaAlarice]: O.o Im such a slacker, lol...But yeah, if I get rolling in this plot, Ill be so ecstatic...I wont stop checking the page for new posts lol. Ive always been a huge fan of the earth element. It just fits me. But I can take air if needbe, lol.

2004-08-13 [Firous]: Take earth...I already have a character I want to do for Air ^.^

2004-08-20 [RheaAlarice]: How should we go about getting Rhea involved, seeing as she stayed at the town

2004-08-21 [Firous]: ...hhhmmm...fight in the battle...with the solders...I have an idea ^.^

2004-08-29 [Lady Alaina]: my computer is fried and i cant get on for a few weeks please do not go too far ahead.

2004-08-31 [Firous]: no prob...it's not going anywhere now...I doubt it will change by the time your back....v.v

2004-09-01 [K'jesrya]: rhea, just let me know when you are ready to come to the castle, and you will go through the same stuff that alania went through to get the earth sword...

2004-09-01 [K'jesrya]: well...i think that we have another character joining soon...yay...and her writing style is quality

2004-09-01 [Firous]: ...who???

2004-09-02 [Firous]: ok...I can't take it anymore...*twitches* Bethany...help me breathe some life into this...PLEASE! I'm going nuts...I want to get this going...it may give me some ideas for my book *.* I want this to get going and I'm sure everyone else does too...soo....GO!

2004-09-02 [Firous]: oh...Bethany...I forgot to tell you about the 'marks' that the swords leave on the owners. Raine has the ice touch...I figured yours would be your tatoo of the elements since you are the gaurdian...so yeah...if you need more info call me ^.^

2004-09-02 [K'jesrya]: oh...ok

2004-09-02 [Firous]: don't forget to put a line after the chapter

2004-09-24 [K'jesrya]: so...what's gonna take place now?

2004-09-24 [Firous]: ...I don't know...lol...give me a minute....ok..I know!

2004-10-01 [Lady Alaina]: HA! I'm back! Finally....

2004-10-01 [K'jesrya]: cool cool...

2004-10-01 [Lady Alaina]: lol This place isnt going anywhere is it? ^^;;

2004-10-02 [K'jesrya]: um...as of right now...not really

2004-10-02 [Firous]: We need more people to be more active for the main plot to occur....it just hasn't gotten there yet

2004-10-04 [Lady Alaina]: lol ^^

2004-10-21 [Firous]: The Army!!!! IT COMES!!!!!! hehehehehehehehehehe

2004-12-06 [Firous]: Woohooooo! go Bethany!

2005-02-12 [K'jesrya]: so....this needs to get going...common

2005-03-01 [Firous]: I just figured out how to work this on the damn msn web tv thingy....this sucks...

2005-03-04 [K'jesrya]: what sucks...and i think that we need to get this story going again...Yay...i mean..yeah...i mean... heh heh..

2005-03-12 [Firous]: lol...help me with this now and we'll really get it going....ready? ^.^

2005-03-17 [K'jesrya]: Sure...why not

2005-04-02 [RheaAlarice]: Gah, a mind is a terrible thing to lose. I think Ive lost it several times, so my memory does often have gaps. But alas, my computer isnt so damn stubborn and I have returned!...to the responsibility of safeguarding Eliy?!? *faints* I was warned...*shrugs* Then protect I shall!

2005-04-13 [Firous]: Yay!!!! Thank you! and now I'm at Ben's to post! hehehe

2005-04-25 [K'jesrya]: Tiff...feel free to control the Elemental Guardians as you see fit. they are yours to control to make safe your city.

2005-04-26 [Firous]: hehehehehe!!!!

2005-07-11 [K'jesrya]: Sorry that i posted for you Rhea...but we needed to get the story going again, and that's the only way that i knew how to do it.

2005-07-13 [K'jesrya]: Come on people...POST!!!!!

2005-10-02 [RheaAlarice]: Quite alright! Ive been very negligent with Eliy. My apologies.

2006-01-13 [Firous]: Who is still watching this page? Roll Call!!

2006-01-14 [K'jesrya]: hey hey...i'm still here...obviously :)

2006-01-15 [Firous]: hehehe...good...it would be hard to kill D'lania. lol. I just need to find out who I'm keeping and who I'm going to replace.

2006-01-23 [Firous]: Well...this sucks... I was hoping that Rhea would still be here. I love Ashley!

2006-02-15 [K'jesrya]: now that's how you role play :)

2006-02-17 [ahsg]: This is good...so when do I join in?

2006-02-17 [Firous]: When ever you are ready. [K'jesrya] and I are the ones in charge. if you want to know how to jump in smoothly and have it coordinated then you should either talk to her or just already be in the city and find Raine to offer your services as a healer to the soldiers. We'll find a way for you to get what you need.

2006-02-17 [K'jesrya]: I have still heard nothing from Alania...so...I am going to write in her ''accident'' and bring in Feyarie...the new Fire Destined....yeah...here goes.

2006-02-17 [Firous]: Hehehehehe! That's awesome! Yay Dragons!!

2006-02-17 [K'jesrya]: So yeah...Aquio..you can basically just jump in wherever you want to. You can start basically wherever you want, either in Eliy or in the surrounding area...and feel the call of the sword or whatever you want. the only thing that you have to do is get to the forest surrounding Eliy and get to my character

2006-02-20 [lost_adonis]: Hello all! well keep on my back and I will happly post being that Im not totaly encaced in school

2006-02-21 [K'jesrya]: quality

2006-02-21 [Firous]: Don't worry...I'll bug you! ^.^

2006-02-21 [K'jesrya]: heh heh...me too

2006-02-21 [Firous]: Are you online still? I need to talk to you

2006-02-22 [K'jesrya]: me??

2006-02-22 [K'jesrya]: man...sometimes it's a bummer to kill of someone...sorry alania

2006-02-26 [ahsg]: Finally my character is done, I better get to work on my side of the story. Not right now though don't have enough time.

2006-02-27 [K'jesrya]: cool cool...you can basically do what you want...the only thing that we...Firous and I, need you to do is either find your way to Raine so she can send you to D'lania, or you somehow stumble across my keep. other than that...welcome to the story

2006-02-27 [Firous]: *claps viciously* Beautiful!!!

2006-02-28 [ahsg]: *puts hand under chin* Interesting.

2006-02-28 [lost_adonis]: Was that claping for me? Why thank you, thank you much!!

2006-02-28 [lost_adonis]: lets get a wind destined and go kick some ass!

2006-03-01 [ahsg]: I finally posted something, tell me what you guys think.

2006-03-01 [lost_adonis]: Good job Aquio, I like lots!

2006-03-01 [K'jesrya]: quality

2006-03-01 [K'jesrya]: apparently it seems as though my writing of the army has fallen into the hands of the other writers...so be it...but Celahir will return shortly ((by the way...you guys write the army however you want...but hands off the bad guy...he's mine heh heh))

2006-03-01 [lost_adonis]: we got impatient, sorry

2006-03-01 [K'jesrya]: no worries

2006-03-01 [lost_adonis]: Hay Aquio! you got skills! don't worry!

2006-03-02 [ahsg]: I posted again, I may be moving too fast but...I don't know.

2006-03-03 [K'jesrya]: nope...you're good dude...no worries

2006-03-03 [Firous]: YAY!!! I'm happy!

2006-03-03 [ahsg]: Al'right, it should get rather interesting now...

2006-03-03 [lost_adonis]: Litirary Tag gives me brakes from anatomy

2006-03-03 [K'jesrya]: Here comes Fire to the rescue...as she cuts a path through the army..Mmwhahaha

2006-03-07 [ahsg]: Yes, the plot thickens. I've always wanted to say that. ^-^

2006-03-07 [ahsg]: I got a little too into Soren, sorry. I wanted explain something about his past to make it clearer.

2006-03-07 [K'jesrya]: not to worry...it's always good to get into your character...writing is always better that way

2006-03-07 [lost_adonis]: I added a bit before aquio got to us and firous should take it in to account when traversing the land with her sword blazing!!!!!

2006-03-08 [K'jesrya]: you mean Feyarie?or firous?

2006-03-08 [lost_adonis]: fire type person thing like girl of the fighting sort... ya

2006-03-08 [lost_adonis]: The not consumed in flames... yet  one.

2006-03-08 [K'jesrya]: Fire and Water...heh heh

2006-03-09 [ahsg]: Man...that is gruesome.

2006-03-09 [lost_adonis]: if i get to dark tell me i will lighten up

2006-03-09 [lost_adonis]: I added a description for D'Hara if you didn't want to go back and try to find when he came into the story.

2006-03-11 [ahsg]: Darn...writers block! Wait, never mind it's gone now. -_-'

2006-03-14 [Firous]: lol...good thing huh! I'm back!!

2006-03-14 [Firous]: Wow...nice! I love it! should I post *again* or is someone else going to?

2006-03-16 [Firous]: Yay!!! I'm happy...this is going great!

2006-03-21 [lost_adonis]: Aquio whare are you?!?

2006-03-21 [ahsg]: I'm back, forgive me. My computer blew up.

2006-03-21 [lost_adonis]: bummer did you survive the cataclysm?

2006-03-21 [lost_adonis]: what I mean to say is POST!!!

2006-03-23 [ahsg]: Soren returns.

2006-03-23 [lost_adonis]: Hazza!!!!

2006-03-27 [K'jesrya]: so...how bout that sky today...talk about blue...

2006-03-29 [ahsg]: I didn't know how to move on from where you guys left off, so I tried to stall for a while.

2006-04-06 [Firous]: I cleaned up the page a little more....we are moving soo fast now it's hard to keep up with the chapters! @.@

2006-04-06 [ahsg]: Looks like it's going to get quite rough for our characters in the story, can't wait to write about the fighting part.

2006-04-07 [Firous]: Hehehehe....I know huh. *meniacal look* (probably didn't spell that right...)

2006-04-12 [ahsg]: Soren's last name revealed.

2006-04-12 [Firous]: Nat 20 on my intimidation check!! lol

2006-04-14 [ahsg]: Where is K'jesrya anyway?

2006-04-14 [K'jesrya]: I'm right here...

2006-04-18 [ahsg]: So sad...maybe he'll be happier now.

2006-04-18 [Firous]: Yay for happiness!!!

2006-04-19 [ahsg]: Yawn...so tired...must...sleep...zzzzzz

2006-04-20 [lost_adonis]: again? last time again?

2006-04-21 [ahsg]: Bad news, real bad news. I might have to go away for a while.

2006-04-21 [lost_adonis]: comma? training with D'lania? got the flu and was bed ridden.

2006-04-21 [Firous]: Where you going?

2006-04-22 [ahsg]: Very recently...my aunt got sick and I want to go see her.

2006-04-24 [Firous]: Then by all means go. We can take care of the wiki until you get back ^.~

2006-04-25 [ahsg]: I'm here again, I am no longer at home but I will still try to keep in touch as much as I can. Aunts still in the hospital, they can't find out what's wrong with her.

2006-04-26 [Firous]: Well...if you need us we'll be here.

2006-04-26 [Firous]: Clean up!!! Lol.... Eleven down...100 to go...jk

2006-04-27 [ahsg]: Hey guys, whenever you need me to write just ask okay. I need to keep my mind occupied.

2006-05-01 [Firous]: You can write your 'challenges' with the sword. Like learning how to make a breeze, strong gust....just nothing too strong. You don't want to be in a coma. Hehehe.

2006-05-03 [lost_adonis]: grumble grumbel finals anatomy organic chemistry... grumble grumbel

2006-05-03 [Firous]: We still love you! ^.^ Or at least I do...hehehe

2006-05-04 [ahsg]: Anatomy? Organic?? Chemistry??? -_- (my brain hurts...)

2006-05-04 [K'jesrya]: yeah...so does mine...

2006-05-04 [lost_adonis]: OOOOHHHH the PPPAAAIIIINNNN!!!!!!!

2006-05-04 [lost_adonis]: post or die!!!!

2006-05-05 [K'jesrya]: hey aquio...D'lania's eyes are green :)

2006-05-05 [K'jesrya]: i'll finish that post when i get to school heh heh

2006-05-05 [K'jesrya]: fenito

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